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Friday, 31 August 2018

I am Poem: Wallaby

Our Class has been writing I Am Poems. I did mine about a wallaby. I hope you enjoy my I am Poem.

I am a curious wallaby.
I wonder if people think I'm a ripoff of the kangaroo.
I hear other little baby wallabies.
I see endless fun of trees.
I want to see more of our species.
I am a wandering wallaby.


I pretend im a kangaroo hopping around.
I feel the leafy ground below me.
I touch the barky trees around me.
I worry that hunters might come and make us extinct.
I cry that more of our species will enter and join us.
I am a wondrous wallaby.



I understand that our species only live for 9 years.
I say to other to keep strong and keep the faith.
I dream of kids enjoying chocolate wallabys and. celebrating our species
I try to be as superior as our cousins the kangaroos.
I hope we are seen as cute and positive animals .
I am a loving wallaby. 💕😂

6 comments:

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  2. It's so heart warming.I didn't know they did easter wallaby.

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  3. Hey Louis its billy ray from kaingaroa school i really like your poem it Get people really in to it bye and great capitals letters bye

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  4. hey louis its kauri i like your story its really cool you should make one again thank you

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  5. hi Louis
    i think your poem is stunning
    one thing i think you could work on is more of a colourful back round and a different font.
    hay did you like making this poem ?

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  6. hi i`m Luka i like your poem our class was making poems thats so nice what you said about wallabies.

    do you have any connections to austrlia

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